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nice flow man
keep this one !
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nice flow man
keep this one !
THX man, glad u like it :D
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great first submission.
i'ed say tone the kick down a little and make the soft synth in the chorus a little louder.
collab wif meee =D
sure y not
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who the fuck mastered the kick?
jesus christ... give me the vocals to this song and i'll do it some justice with a decent tune!!!
seriously you must of just compressed the shit out of it
Get a decent sound system. Your system must be compressed to shit. It's a low bass. Down in 60hz-112hz range. Which means you need a SUBWOOFER to hear it. The song is mastered fine you just listening to it on some garbage. And ontop of that you could never make a better track then me. So please go sit down somewhere. And you can put them dots. Up ya ass.
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when the piano started with the beat it sounded unnatural and out of time but as you get used to the flow it sounds good.
well done on this
Yea becouse its sopposed to be accompanied by "Honking"
i had to take it out due to bad reviews
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you can tell its a lil quickie man.
er did you compress anything?
some nice synths in there to be fair and loops well.
if you send me the project+sounds whatever i'll give it a go at trying to improve it if you want?
speak back man
rate fair next time if u dont know how to reply back on my pm iight man
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cool beat.
i think you were going for the simple approach but try for more complicated synths and see what happens?
also change the crash that comes in every 4 beats?
It really clashes with the smoothness of the song and sounds out of place.
also at the end (about 2mins) try changing that up and down synth with a app and see what it sounds like?
Thought i'ed give you what you wanted. somethings to improve on.
peace.
Exactly man, critique is always a welcome comment, probably not going to do much else with this now because I already re-upped a modified version, but will take your advice with me to anything new I create.
jhende
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very nice to listen to when your occupied
i see the mix of ambient synths and classical piano working together nicely.
my only problem with the song is that the synths seem very thin and might need to have more chords or different octaves to thicken the sounds at certain points.
Also, certain parts where the music stops suddenly ruins for me the rhythm that the song has. perhaps some quiet crashes will sort this out?
thanks for uploading this song.
favourited.
Tread.
Thank you very much for the review! Sorry it took me so long to respond, I only just realized there was a new review.
I will certainly take this review into account when I produce my next piece!
P.S. Those synths are GB's bad imitation of violins.
P.S.S. I forgot.
P.S.S.S. Oh yeah. Three nines in a row, pretty cool huh. ;D
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kool track but that 1 low hit that comes every bar at :22 is very distorted.
sry for that :(
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tell you what man that sound was sweet.
keep goin
Cheers!
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that rap beat is shit
good lyrics
we thought the beat was good lol, but thanks for the review.
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